rate_review Reviews

Hey there. This was an interesting piece. You have a nice way with words. I like it. Though I do suggest getting a beta reader next time- simply because it makes a story more pleasant to read and easier to understand if the language and grammar are clear.

I was a little confused, but it seemed almost like the story was supposed to leave you like that- though I may be misunderstanding.

Either way, good job on the style. ^___^