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for Dark Fire

by KathleenTrinity

person CelestialGoddess
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start i think im hooked keep going plz
person Kap\'n Nemo
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyy....this is starting to sound goood! Continue, per favore.
person Joey
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Doin' the old, "If you review I will write faster..." Always seems to work. ^.- Very nice, so far, I don't have too much to say as the whole underlying plot has yet to be discovered. So hurry up, will ya? Sheesh. :P
person the lawnmower
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow so her dad totally reminds me of my "game" father. what a bastard bag. i like it lots. only she should have refused him a bit longer. it would have been more fun that way- make him work for it! love the names too. update more often cuz it's awesome!

p.s. there... satisfied? both stories have been reviewed *sticks tongue out*
person bookworm
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like! As usual....and I'm uber excited about what is to come *nods* *skips about* (sorry, I had too much chocolate) but it was tres nifty, just you you.
As always,
The Rake
person Katy
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it...i really want more...this s the kind of fic that i would find ike almost finsihed with like 20 chapters and sit down and read then all in oe sitting...id do it too!!
person you know who
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like, i like... especially b/c \"Sean Bean\" is awesome and is nice... and BETTER NOT DIE... otherwise i kill you... dead...
person Aldys
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good!! Excellent story line. You can go places with this, I believe. PLEASE write more!

The vampire,
Aldys Annabel Clairveux
person bookworm
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello darling, as you already know, I love it. One tiny thing...i before e, except after c (see if you can figure out where I\'m talking about.) Oh, and by the way, I just wanted to say, I love her name, it has a lovely ring to it. *nods* thats all for now...go write more. Now HOE!!!!
With lots of love,
the Rake