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schedule
July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...mark of a good writer, i liked how you professionally described the background and situation..something abt german and swedish impressed me..nice!
schedule
July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, after trawling through the utter dullness of all that descriptive writing it was quite good. If you put the effort of describing the surroundings into the sex scenes it\'d be a whole lot better.
schedule
July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story,please write more chapters or a few sequels