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schedule
April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stop saying \"by that time....\"
schedule
July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay first off pick a name and stick with it. first the girls name was tara then it was tifa? also try having someone read over your writing. warped means like something is like water warped is ruined and deminishing from it. WRAPED is what you meant.