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nice

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That was excellent! I was surprised when I came across the title! I thought that it sounded like my old story ^_^ Was very honored by it. Thanks for continuing with it, I lost all my files when Fanfiction kicked us off. If you want to post the chapter I wrote, feel free, its your story now ^_^ I look forward to reading more! Feel free to email me!

i'm fairly certian that the original "Family Night" is posted on this site, although its towards the back of this catagory, i first saw it here after ff.net baned nc-17 fics a few years ago, i dont think the author has been to the site in a while though

There are a few things I want to say. One this was a great story. I really enjoyed it. But you need to make sure the author of the story you are taking this from is okay with it. I would hate for you to get into trouble for that because you could get into a lot of trouble for that. Two I like this story better than the one you got the idea from and I think you are a good enough writer to where you could write your own. I hope you do decide to write your own story with your own characters. It could be the same idea, it would just be better if you used your own names. I hope you won\'t think of this as a flame.

okay first i would like to say i loved both fics, but I have one question. You have the mother as the stepmother of both the girl and the boy, then you have the boy and the girl as stepsiblings.... So I say this to you. Don\'t be afraid of the incest. ;) It only makes it hotter.

ohhhh. now that I read the first one I understand. mmm. I like incest though... maybe you can have the father and son do it. or at least be fingered (begs hopefully)

Just an update to all readers: Loven Bunny has published the original on this service. You can go to http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/authors.php?no=8611 to read the original. Props to her for a wonderful PWP story.

great! i hope you get in contact with that author so that i can read the original!