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by QuietPain

person Blazewing
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I thought your writing style was a little off... and you made a few confusing errors at points. I admire your skill at dialouge while your plot seems to lit little rushed.

I want to read more, however. Even thought there\'s nothing in the fanfic at the moment to make it rated R. I have faith in the yaoi.

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