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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Only problem. In the first chapter u changed the name from Sarah to Kelly in one part. funny...amusing..whos Kelly???
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GAWD!!!!!!! THAT GIRL IS SUCH A FUCKIN IDIOT!!!!!!!! I MEAN SWERIOUSLY HOW OLD WAS SHE 16???? I MEAN SERIOUSLY THE SUMMARY SAID INNOCENT BUT BELIEVE ME ITS NOT CALLED INNOCENT ITS CALLED BEING FRICKIN RETARDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this fic was so good u have got to update soon im gonna die if u dont.. it was well written and very well detailed update soon..
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!~please e-mail me next time u update *giggles*
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*moans* That was sooo good! What happens next?! Does he get her pregnant? that would be so cute and sexy! More!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....intersting!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story but the girl is a bit of an idiot to not know what the hell they\'ve been doing...seriously. is she really that innocent or is she just acting the part. make her a bad girl next and then have him dominate her or something. that would be hot.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good job. But in da first chappy you used Kelly\'s name, that\'s what confused me >< But that was probably a mistake. write something more ^~ Its interesting ^^
~Fox
~Fox
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMOOOOORRREEEE!!!
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
write more!!!