rate_review Reviews

Ok, whoever you are, all I can do at this moment is applaud you. This story is excellent. It\'s first person, for one, which should obviously be done more often. And, truthfully, it blew my mind. It was written, dare I say it ^^, professionally. While written from the aspect of a woman, for some reason I found that the male had as as much to do with the story. Just as much, character. The ultimate bit, of course, is that all of it is the fabrications of a girl masturbating. Which, you suspect, but never dare to dream that all this could be just that. A fabrication. Well, anyway, I just wanted to say continue what you\'re doing. And thanks, while I recieved no moral factor from the story, it was quite enjoyable. From a sex standpoint (Of course, which is probably why it\'s in Sex/Erotica now that I think about it...), but also from an outlook as a writer.

~Nicolas

I loved it. I loved the fact that it was in the first person, the topic. I just enjoyed every minute of it. I am glad that there are writers out there that know how to write a good story/scene. Thank you.

superb writing

even tho it was a man....it still reminded me of my girl....*lil sigh* it reminds me of her and how many nights I\'ve spent away from her and how many more I still have to spend...

This was truly a lovely piece.

Hell...that is what i think of in my dorm room!!!! Very good.

whoo hoo!! fantastic stuff~~*runs off to take one VERY cold shower!!*
Very well done, Lady!

esthesthealer