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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot, and yet so sad at the same time. I've been in a dry spell lately that has me fantasizing quite a bit about secret lovers. This story hit a cord in me, it's so familiar. Thank you for writing it.
Leonhart29
Leonhart29
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing!! Your writing style is fantastic and motivating. ^.~
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ldf,
What can I say about this, but WOW! :)
I\'m normally not a big fan of second person narration, but this one had me from the first word. I guess the second
person narratives I\'ve read before haven\'t let me \'in\' to the story per se, but this one...definitely could imagine myself
in both of these encounters! :)
You\'re such a great writer, hon...your talent with description blows me away. It\'s not often at all that I can put myself
into a story so much...but definitely here! :)
Kudos, hon, to an extremely talented authoress!
What can I say about this, but WOW! :)
I\'m normally not a big fan of second person narration, but this one had me from the first word. I guess the second
person narratives I\'ve read before haven\'t let me \'in\' to the story per se, but this one...definitely could imagine myself
in both of these encounters!
You\'re such a great writer, hon...your talent with description blows me away. It\'s not often at all that I can put myself
into a story so much...but definitely here!
Kudos, hon, to an extremely talented authoress!
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful
even my boyfriend loved it
you should write more fics like this
even my boyfriend loved it
you should write more fics like this
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories i\'ve ever read on the website.
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo woman!! that was fantastic!! i truly enjoy reading every thing that you write, and espcically have enjoyed reading these two chapters!!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again this was very good. I love how you write in first person. Great job...
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...sniff. I was loving this story until the very end. What a sad ending...just a memory or a thought of a lost lover. So sad. I just felt my heart break for her. Beautiful writing, as always.
Red
Red
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s been a long time since i\'ve posted anywhere. i read this and it moved me. i must admit that i\'ve had fantasies like this... or something like it... before, when i was alone. it sucks when you come to reality and realized that the one you were with... the one you care so much for... is just a figment. sorta slaps you up a bit and makes you open your eyes to the fact that you ARE alone. this is a really well written piece. if anyone can argue that, i\'d like to hear it.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a dream! It is so very explicit it makes me think I need to go and have a very cold shower now. Very good work, girl.