rate_review Reviews

Ah Melrick, one of the few authors on this site that writes with grace. This was a pretty good piece of writing, and though, as you say, it\'s not original, it\'s still very worth reading. The descriptions of sex were great, and well, even though the story was conventional, it was very hot. Keep it up! And no, I\'m not going to beg for you to continue it with another chapter unless you have ideas for it, because these stories don\'t usually have real endings. Rather, if you can write more one-chapter smut with the same themes, that would be great.

One word: HOT!