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for Max Takes a Chance

by Melrick

person aliasluvr
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I luv it. Hope you continue or make a sequal.
person Kasandra
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. Kinda disappointed that you're not going to continue this but it is a great story.
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting - I have read quite a few of these over the years as well. You did a good job
person where am i?
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
where am i?
person mev852
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really erotic, man! I love it. You should write another chapter where he has sex with his mom and he KNOWS that she is fully aware of the proceedings. That would be great.
person moon
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was incredibly sexy... i think there should be more... maxy should get his mommy pregnant or something... wow def. came hard on that one- thanx
person Matt
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is one hot story. It made me hotter than hell. Write more please!!!
person someone
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good add another chapter
person Jaquard
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I liked it. This is sweet even. Hope you have to write yourself out of mental blocks again.
person oversexed
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!! Loved it. Are you gonna continue it? Because this seems to good to stop writing