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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
Its me again, read your new chapter! LOVE IT!!! I want to read more, I want to know what happens next! Please update soon!
Thank you, Tamela
Its me again, read your new chapter! LOVE IT!!! I want to read more, I want to know what happens next! Please update soon!
Thank you, Tamela
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I love your story and would appreciate the next chapter, please continue. Your story is wonderful, easy to understand, your characters are definable, however, your transitions arent smooth and your characters need more depth. Please understand im not a professional writer but you wanted reviews so here is mine.
Regardless of my opinion, I want to read more of your story and hopefully others as well. You are truely talented, I believe with some polishing you will demonstrate a powerful gift of story telling!
Thank you
I love your story and would appreciate the next chapter, please continue. Your story is wonderful, easy to understand, your characters are definable, however, your transitions arent smooth and your characters need more depth. Please understand im not a professional writer but you wanted reviews so here is mine.
Regardless of my opinion, I want to read more of your story and hopefully others as well. You are truely talented, I believe with some polishing you will demonstrate a powerful gift of story telling!
Thank you