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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And I now know why that won. Wow. You write really well and actually managed to make it humorous without making it corner. *applaudes* Hurray for you! Although I must admit I feel sorry for their friends. *giggles* I loved it! And really, REALLY enjoyed reading it
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! It's very funny and sexy too... love it love it love it, it's no wonder you won that contest.
Write more stuff!
XOXO
Meg/deafmelon/kaie
Write more stuff!
XOXO
Meg/deafmelon/kaie
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You *know* you wanna write a sequel...
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good, there are a couple things I would change but other than that it was alright. You should get a beta, and if you already do, fire 'em, and get a new one. It doesn't read well and should flow more. Also moetaietail. It seemed as though the scenes were too short. Cheers!
~Killisandra~
~Killisandra~
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You had me laughing the whole way through!! No wonder you won!!! That was hilarious!
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha. That's what I call tough love. I liked the story alot. You are quite creative. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m putting you under my recommendations. Hope you don\'t mind!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ai, Gods! That was marvelous! ::grins:: I quite adored it.