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PLS DO A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! that was great story

Very good start. I like it. Let me keep going... (Obviously it\'s good, I\'m still going)

Hmm... Unsure of how to feel. It was very short, and I really don\'t have the grasp of Case as I did with Rick & Trina with the lone.one. Hmm... Let\'s keep going

Big Smile. Although right now dubious in his intent, I like Rick. Sooo, men CAN fake it. Interesting. Gotta look out for that one! Comtinuing...

Loving the tension...

Okay, Case is quite the saucy little minx. Loving her right now. Loving him right now. Defely ely in for the ride (AHEM) right now...

Absolutely!

WOW. Huh, WOW...
Quite the ending.
Very powerful.
Deep down I don\'t want it to end, I want to see some sort of redemption or resolution.
I like your story concept. I can see a fully developed story deep within there. This story wasn\'t porn without plot. There\'s something there you want to bring out and share.
The triangle action, the losing of the virginity, having to share, not having, wanting, not wanting, the abortion of course, the acts of betrayal to all parties also with themselves.
I see something brimming deep from the surf If If you do decide to continue with this story or bring out what you wanted, I\'ll be waiting in the wings to watch and congratulate.
And otherwise, your pacing was wonderful. Your quiet moments of stolensionsion was adored.
Keep writing, please. I see the promise of a great writer of raw emotions and situations.