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March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hot. Like ur work. Can't wait 2 read others
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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
buenisimo, ana maria
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm this got me sooooo wet
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bad english. Sucked ass.
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this story rocks and i cant wait to read more...plz write more cuz its good so far!! ant ant to see how it all turns out!! thx so much!!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you\'re begging for a review, so i\'m going to give you one. the problem with your story is that the spacing is really annoying. it\'s alusheushed together, practically in one big paragraph, so that makes it hard to read. the story itself is fine, though. people probably don\'t even bother reading it because of the paragraph thing. (i didn\'t bother reading it the first time i saw it up her, either, because of that). so just fix the paragraph thing, put space between your paragraphs, moremore people will take the time to read it.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wild story, but has a lot of potential to it. Watch out for spelling and grammer errors and you\'ll be fine. It\'s a nice sexy fic.