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by RavenBlack

person The PD
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on :D Write more! ITS TWISTED!
person Faye
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was okay, I guess. Personally, I'd be a little freaked out if my stuffed animal began to move by itself!
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just sick...
person Anonymous Flamer
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really fucking LAME. I mean, come on, girls who are 7 and 10 respectively don't have any idea of sexual pleasures, nor would they have orgasms...

Besides the facts, the writing sucked.
person The PD
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still need to add to it...

To anyone whom thinks that this is wrong and perverted... You read it too ya kno :-)
person Vicious
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The main problem is the English errors and the fact that few people would want to read about explicit sex with children.

Also, this fails to explain WHY a toy would do this to a child. And children below puberty cannot have orgasms.
person ummmok
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just about the stupidist thing I\'ve ever read. It barely made sense. Little girls would not just let a purple toy play around their pussies. Seriously needs revision, and more description. One more thing, are all these girls not virgins?
person M.J.
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is by far the best tent fic yet.... more kiddies!!!!!!!!!!!
person xs sexs
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. thats all i have to say. asside from the fact that the story is far to short, this thang rulz!