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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have a good story but the ### are distracting. If you are not confortable writing words like dick, ass, or pussy maybe you should write a story where those words will be used. This is an adult site so we are all use to seeing those words. This is by no means a flame. I just think you would have a better story if you wrote the words out. Other than that the story was fine.