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Nice, as long it is happy, consensual and of consenting age I'm okay.

Wow, last post was 2006. My time has gone by. Anyways, I liked your story and can appreciate what you feel and what you did. Our world has a code invented by people who where afraid of other people. I'm sure some exploring empire found people that practiced incest regularly and out of confusion simply said 'fuck this, it's illegal now.' I would prefer though if any practiced incest was protected to avoid the already stated genetic defects in children. I only say this because I find the next generation's well being more important than out pleasure (and I did catch the fact you used a condom.) I agree and support your lifestyle and hope you can get the most out of your shared relationship. On a different note though, I was wondering why your story had so many question marks in it. Don't get me wrong, for a first person story the writing is fine but if you where ever interested, I could edit your story in 15 minutes. I've actually edited about 30 AFF stories before so you can be guaranteed I'm not learning on the job. There is nothing to lose if you ever want my help; besides, it will help put the well hidden story back on the front page for a day or two (you can never have too many hits :P)

dude...

that's sick. fucking disgusting. you seriously need help if you think that it's okay.

If you didn't notice your formatting is all screwed up, and it makes this poorly written story nearly impossible to read.

That was so cute! I hope you two can be very happy together, Love is a wonderful feeling, no matter what you are, who you are, if black, gay, lesbian, brothers, father and daughter..everybody has the right to be happy and accepted.

Just wanting to say that I'll be publishing the sequal to this story very soon. A lot new has happened in my life, and as soon as the uploading part of the site is working again, I'l upload the story.

Thanks to all of you who posted reviews.

Puppy

oh yea now do more

Firstly, let me just say that as far as I'm concerned there's nothing wrong with incest, it's just the manner of bringing it about that can often be questionable. The only conceived problem with incest, is that it can lead to genetic defects to to inbreeding of the family weaknesses (Bad skin and such). This is true, but is somewhat long-term, so when it comes to incest, the only danger is if it starts to span more than one generation.

I don't worry that he may be using you, as that has been said, and is up to you to tell. That said, as long as the world remains oblivious to the relationship, I wish you well, congratulate you on your boldness in writing this, and wish you the luck of the Goddess for your life.

hey,

I don't mean to accuse or say anything that would hurt your feelings but that kind of relationship with your father is not quiet right. I am not condemning or whatever. I know people have pshycological problems. I have a lot of fantasies and alot of them are pretty kinky but I would never dream of even having sex with my siblings or father. I hope that you get therapy. I'm not saying your crazy. I'm just saying you need protection from that kind of things. No children should have that kind of thinking.

A very touching story about boarderless love. I feel what you\'re saying about wasting your virginity on a loser, inner conflicts about your own sexuality as a youth, social moral issues. People can relate to dealing with those issues though usually not in a trio like you did. I commend you on your strength to dealing with those problems.

Now whether this story is really real or not doesn\'t matter; I wish you the best of luck in your life.