AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Happy Birthday Baby

by oliverwoodubmine

schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shmexsy. Very shmexy. I\'ve had hot dreams where I was both people. It\'s really encompassing and arousing. It\'s like you know what both people want and what to do for each of them to make them happy. This story kind of reminded me of that. You could use a spell checker. You know, make sure that all the spells you cast are checked. (my stupid humor).
person kittynip9
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I say you should write more. I really liked this and want ot see what else you can do.