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for A Rainy Day

by GAURAV9198

person Ummm
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like a child knew too much about sex and wrote a story.....no offense
person Ophelia
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I\'m guessing by your name and by your story that English is not your native language. You must have a firmer grasp on the grammar of the English language before you publish your writings--you have many tense problems and spelling errors, as well.

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