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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read this before but can't remember if I reveiwed it. This story is just as good the second time around!!Sweet and sexy-- a great short story
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it , short-sexy and sweet.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute story ^_^
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adorable!!! I loved it!!! ^__^ Very interesting idea, and quite well done -- I especially loved how you characterized the two and how detailed your descriptions were. Again, wonderful job -- keep up the good work!!!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOooooh, cute. I like this. I love the description and how you wrote your story. Your characters are very convincing and well written. There were some parts that were confusing ... well, I guess it might just have to do with the place and timeline, but I was still taken in rather quickly. Very captivating. I think they fell in love a bit too quickly but it\'s still convincing. I loved Airyn and how you wrote him. From his family to his insecurities; you managed to make him more then just a story book person but a very REAL person.
All in all, it was a pleasure to read and I look forward to exploring your other stories!
All in all, it was a pleasure to read and I look forward to exploring your other stories!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooohh! Nice story. I have a real boner now!
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I enjoyed it imensely. Oh and where have I heard faradhim before? What book? Or am I insane? Anyhow, lovely story. Wonderful grammar and sentence structure ( varied as well ), there aren\'t very many stories online ( especially on AFF ) that are as well written as this. Keep up the good work!
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March 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story! It was well done and unfolded beaitfully. Keep on writing!