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I have read this before but can't remember if I reveiwed it. This story is just as good the second time around!!Sweet and sexy-- a great short story

I liked it , short-sexy and sweet.

This is a really cute story ^_^

Absolutely adorable!!! I loved it!!! ^__^ Very interesting idea, and quite well done -- I especially loved how you characterized the two and how detailed your descriptions were. Again, wonderful job -- keep up the good work!!!

OOOooooh, cute. I like this. I love the description and how you wrote your story. Your characters are very convincing and well written. There were some parts that were confusing ... well, I guess it might just have to do with the place and timeline, but I was still taken in rather quickly. Very captivating. I think they fell in love a bit too quickly but it\'s still convincing. I loved Airyn and how you wrote him. From his family to his insecurities; you managed to make him more then just a story book person but a very REAL person.
All in all, it was a pleasure to read and I look forward to exploring your other stories!

ooooohh! Nice story. I have a real boner now!

Very well written. I enjoyed it imensely. Oh and where have I heard faradhim before? What book? Or am I insane? Anyhow, lovely story. Wonderful grammar and sentence structure ( varied as well ), there aren\'t very many stories online ( especially on AFF ) that are as well written as this. Keep up the good work!

ta

Brilliant story! It was well done and unfolded beaitfully. Keep on writing!