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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well written [though in need of minor editing], the characters are cute, and the whole thing was absolutely hilarious. I love the overall sarcastic tone and how well you make all the elements fit together.
Great job. ^^
Great job. ^^
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a total rape of a traditional farietale (almost in the spirit of disney)...
I LOVED it!!!
I LOVED it!!!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was great... i've never laugh so hard before.. it reminded me of cinderella & that is funny...
though i was hoping u could conclude with a big bang smut.. hahaha XD
try other fairy tales like mermaid (making love to a mute girl...), snow white(taking turns with 1 dwarfs/dwarves each day), aladdin(being hypnotized into doing it) etc.. (except "sleeping beauty" cause i think it's perfect.)
though i was hoping u could conclude with a big bang smut.. hahaha XD
try other fairy tales like mermaid (making love to a mute girl...), snow white(taking turns with 1 dwarfs/dwarves each day), aladdin(being hypnotized into doing it) etc.. (except "sleeping beauty" cause i think it's perfect.)
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--snickers-- It was funny! Could definatly use a beta or two to refine it, but I still enjoyed it!!!!!! I\'ve seen twists on Cinderella before, but never quite like this! I adore it! Keep it up ^.^
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just love transvestites. he reminds me of ariel from the little mermaid.
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that\'s one parody of cinderella that I like!
I give it 5 ratings ^^
I give it 5 ratings ^^
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is darn good, I should say.
When the hell did people write this kind of stories?
You\'re as brilliant as your story is... Even more.
Shortly; I liked it, matey!
When the hell did people write this kind of stories?
You\'re as brilliant as your story is... Even more.
Shortly; I liked it, matey!
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*two thumbs up* Excellent>:]