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for Littermates

by Scribe

person GreenEyes
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a wonderful story. It made me cry more than once. Beautifully, well written. You are a very talented writer.
person Phaedra
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can use this to "help test the system" and to thank you for all the shiny new parts of Littermates lately. LEt me grow more of a brain and I will give you more feedback
person Luna
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. This has to be the best story I\'ve ever read on this site. The characters are just so beautifully real. After the first chapter, it didn\'t feel like I was reading this so much as watching a play before my eyes. I can\'t wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.
i hope you update soon, this story is amazing.
person Beth
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Emergance, chapter 28

LOVELY! I am really enjoying this story, I look forward to updates! Glad kitty got to go out and play! ;)
person mkire
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! you\'re updating littermates again! Yay!
person Morgan
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scribe,

God, I love you! Reading your fic gives me such happies!!!!! But now, I must bring out your trademarked pointy stick of encouragement and beg you to update Littermates if you can. I really love this fic and Iit\'s the one that really made me a hardcore Scribe fan. Well, this and anything with Clive in it.

Hmmm......Clive/Naresha ficcage.....Give them both a happy dream......

Crap, sorry.

Moving on, you may want to include a link or short explination about what a Malkavian is in the fic. I didn\'t know and had to look it up online.

Another question I wanted to ask: Are all three sisters putting up the catatonic schizophrenic facade or is it just Milda? Or is it someone completely different?

Anyway, keep up the excellent work. I look forward to more!
person Hazel
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yey! new chapter :D I\'m not good at this reviewing malarky so i\'ll just stick with - it was fabulous, please write more. Thank you.
person Beth
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, a nice suprise to see you have updated this story. Now my wandering how she was not discovered changing while in the hospital has been answered! I look forward to seeing more of this odd hospital, and it\'s staff. And of course, the girls too! (sly grin)
person Joey
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. This has got to be THE best story I have ever read written on one of these sites. I am so serious - It was amazing! And that's saying a lot, because I read stories like this all the time, but none of them have EVER been as good as this one. It was simply awesome. I can't even begin to describe how amazing it was. The characters were excellent, so defined and you never mixed them up! The plot was great, always kept the reader on his or her toes, and so unique! Three different people sharing one body, with two others thrown in occasionally? Genius. And it's not even like you got tired of that and made them three sperate people. No, you stuck to it. There was just enough romance to make it good, but it wasn't like you went and lathered the whole thing with it, and it wasn't just mindless smut either. Hell, even the grammar and spelling was good. All around, it was EXCELLENT!
But, one question: What happened to Kathleen? I know that you wrote she was "in the fog," but does she just stay there for years on end? I think you mentioned in the summary that this was the beginning, how all three of those girls got there. So I'll go find the other one that must follow this, and find out. But yea, great work, keep it up! I hope you write something this good in the future and post it up here.