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for Unspoken

by Kade

person loveangelli
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAWWWW That was SSOOO cute. I know porn isn\'t really sapposed to be cute but that was SO cute. When two pwoplw are in love it just makes it ten times better. You are a great writer.

much love to ya.
LoveangelLi flying away.
person AnimeLover
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! That was some good writing! I hope you have more like that elsewhere, cuz I\'m sure this was just a one-shot.
person Rhia
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like the lack of names. Good over all.
person nyx kiden
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful. You certainly had way with words. More, please?
person the pope
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very well written. i like your style. i look forward to reaading more of your work.
person foxfox
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good, I like your descriptions. Especially the \'as if tracing a design\' bit. It\'s hard to find new, original pieces. Hope you continue :D