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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dosen\'t Col relize that girls always find out what you say about them? Anyway, i wanna see part 2!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is fantasmic. keep writing it. now! i didnt read it for a while becaues i thought it would be all angsty, and it kind of is, but i like your writing style. keep it up. and udate like a fiend.
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is interesting. But I noticed that Col said that \'you\' would set the rules of the game. But instead, he was the one to do that. He stes all the rules and plays as he wants, maybe forgetting about who was supposed to set the rules. Anyway, I like the story. Keep writing :o)
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the reacurring sandlewood. The chemistry between the two is so perfect.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear lord. That was very arousing. The first sex scene was excellent [more detail >;-] the rest was awesome too...
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this... the big question is, which dom will prevail? My money is on the girl. Did you ever give us her name?
I think Col is outmatched.
Cheers.
I think Col is outmatched.
Cheers.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanna hear about the \"study date\". ;-)
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue. im anxious to see what happens next!