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BRING THE BANYSITTER BACK PLEASE.

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OMFG!!!!!IT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!PLZ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! give more butt fucking and peeing. Also more club memebers (not all the time but from time to time add someone new[can be to age of 30])
oh and more bro/sis incest^__^

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!! Make misweavr bring sex machines like the sybian and the thruster for them...and more animal fucking!!

AWESOME..This Rox!!! Update Soon!!!!

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This is a hard kind of ongoing fic to write...when kids are doing things with kids, and there a few criticims I\'ve got. First off...the transitions to sex? that could be better...I mean, the stuff just doesn\'t happen magically, you know. There\'s a good deal of awkwardness with adults with sex to begin, so there will obviously be more with kids. Next...G spots are not going to be hit with four inch dicks. They just won\'t, and trust me, I know enough about it. Lastly...adults in this story with the kids is just plantruntrusive. I\'d suggest sticking to the kids/teenagers, not messing around with adults...let\'s be honest, with kid/adult happenings, the adult is less likely to get off from that.

Also, as observation, more f/f could happen, just to brighten it a little.

These past couple of chapters were great. FYI, chapter 9 was posted twice. The peeing thing is pretty creative. Usually, I\'m not into that, but it\'s kinda cool in your fic. If you\'re gonna go for the preg (which, I will admit, I am a sucker for) how about Miss Weaver? That would be a neat twist.

i like it. very nice. it would be great if you could make the chapters longer and with more detail too....

I\'ll think about it, Maddy. Thanks to everyone for the reviews!