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for Roman Enslavement

by Scribe

person Bridget
schedule December 17, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. So glad to see it was updated. I can't wait for the next update; I'm looking forward to reading everything that happens between Lupus and Mozelle.
person Fiona Rayne
schedule December 16, 2002 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story- and well done for bringing the actual Roman Gods into it- it's interesting to see how they react and how real they seem instead of being far off mythical beings (pretty much how they are portrayed in anything else Roman that I've read)

Fangirl vibes are beginning to come through...

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
person Fiona Rayne (again)
schedule December 16, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Well,

I quite agree with the fact that the main character had no idea she was being sold. I don't think anyone who had no experience of Roman life or language would.

Don't like the guy she was bought by...bastard. You've written him well, I just wanted to beat him with a lead pipe all the time.

I hope she hasn't been bought by someone nasty- they don't sound like that anyway.

Onto the next chapter then!
person cessa
schedule December 6, 2002 at 12:00 AM
great story!
continue!
person Iseng
schedule October 23, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, love this story! I hope you write more in future and I think a nice sequel is called for, don\'t you think? *Grins*