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July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I like your story, I'm eager to reading the sequel (I'm at chapter 4 now). A little detail : you said she saw potatoes in the kitchen in Antique Rome, that's impossible because potatoes were discovered by europeans (conquistadors) in the 16th century in south America and european people began eating them in the 18th century only.
I like your story, I'm eager to reading the sequel (I'm at chapter 4 now). A little detail : you said she saw potatoes in the kitchen in Antique Rome, that's impossible because potatoes were discovered by europeans (conquistadors) in the 16th century in south America and european people began eating them in the 18th century only.
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I am looking forward to reading the sequel. Well written, one of the best written stories I have read on any fiction site so far.
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands* OMG this truly was a great story to read. I started reading it and went past my bedtime to try and finish it. Each chapter was just another cliff hanger waiting for the next. And the ending oh I was crying when Lumpus said he had to give her to that bastard. I was like NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. But then the next twist.
Truly a great story.
Truly a great story.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, I was going to be a real poop, and not review...but I just had to!...I understand how long it must have taken for you to write this story...and to have people read it and not at least thank-you for it is so damn annoying.....
So, here I go....Thank-you. That was a brilliant story...and I'm looking forward now to reading the sequel, and finding out how the love affair between Lupus and Mozelle goes in the 21st Century....
So, here I go....Thank-you. That was a brilliant story...and I'm looking forward now to reading the sequel, and finding out how the love affair between Lupus and Mozelle goes in the 21st Century....
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scribe, if you are not writing real fiction, you should be. Kudos.
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is such a fantastic story! great job!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. It\'s cute, humorous and intelligently written. I like the deities.
What I liked most was when Gaius gave Mozelle a flower; \"since you said you lost yours\".
What I liked most was when Gaius gave Mozelle a flower; \"since you said you lost yours\".
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!!!!!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazing
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that is one of the best sifi/historical fictionsa I have had the pleasuere of reading than you so much for your hard work and not bad latin ... if more mordern then anicat