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for The Good Girl

by LoveHime

person zo
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow hothothot please update soon
person luverly
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsum sto.i l.i luv it...lots of plot....not endless smut..struggle between the antagonist anfd the protagonist...relly cool,....lolz
person Hannah
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I love how descriptive and enticing the plot is. ^__^ Keep it going. Ja ne.
person meowr
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it would be cool if juri managed to find some strength to push him off for a long while and drive him crazy by extending the foreplay he started, withholding sex *grin* till he breaks down from desire and then some... after which daisuke realises how much he loves her... just a suggestion tho.. every one loves happy endings.. don\'t we? *eville plotting grin*
person GoldstormKaos
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is amazin\' stuff! Please, please write more.ots ots more...




Lots lots more... ^_^
person idenm
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it realy. it is very very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kikey
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is extremely good. It has a very sensous tone mixed with high school drama. I can\'t wait to read more.

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