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for The Good Girl

by LoveHime

person Anon
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please PLEASE update soon!!! i loooooove this story!!!
person kurumi
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is excellent. update asap.
person Skyler
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your a natural! Very sexy writing, i cant wait to read more, now? please? lol
person Byron
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love an overactive subconscious. I\'m likin\' this story, please continue.
person Hannah
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^ The way you write, the way you leave me hanging, heh it\'s great. All of it. I love your work. Update soon.
AIM: thingwifdrummers
- Hannah
person Rogue
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very well written and the story line is sooooooooooooooo sexy. I love the main guy...you describe him well.
I would like to see the main character be strong. I want her to resist him or even turn the tables. Make him want her really bad, tease him. What fun!! I can not wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!!
person Rosie
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was hot!!! Please write more asap!
person pheonixrising
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story! you MUST write more! I am in love with it! you are a fantastic writer!
person Loca
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo good. I can\'t wait to read the rest =)
person PopPrincess15
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It\'s got a way of making a person want more.....Add another chapter! SOON!

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