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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so unbelievably hot. I\'m so glad you brought in the dad, and under the pretense of blackmail, no less! Very nice! Can\'t wait until John is full out fucking at least one of them!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m back! Another excellent chapter, except one thing. They\'re kids, and they\'re probably not going to say \"Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck me!\" This is the only flaw, and besides that, very hot! :-)
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is good and well written. I really liked it.
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah! You updated! I\'d been looking forward to your next chapter. Your writing is getting better and better, and the chapters are just as hot as ever. Keep up the awesome work!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think their dad should catch them and join in the fun!
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fucking shit. I think incest is the best you made me wet...
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, but another cliffhanger!! Next time, have one of the boy\'s friends open the door.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good! I hope to read more of it soon ^_^ keep it up!
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww, cheers guys. I\'ve never really been good with writing M/F stuff (I\'m gay...I don\'t know about mens bits) but fuck me if you don\'t learn LOADS of stuff here. I still have plenty of stuff planned in my head, any mistakes forgive me...I usually write best when I\'m really tiror sor some weird reason. Anyway, thank you for your support, it\'s much appreciated and you\'ll definitely be getting a shower scene >:)
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve said it before, and I\'ll sayit again: MORE! MORE MORE!! MORE!!! Another great chapter, accept for the cliffhanger. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! Update soon, please!