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by foxfox

person raver
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, if you can\'t log on, then why not start an entirely new account and repost all of your chapters? makes sense to me. if you do, be sure to let us know, of course.
person androbabe
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t log in!! damn it! Was just to say I AM writing another chapter. I don\'t know what happened to the writing, but after all the stories got reset, something weird happened. I\'ve noticed it in a few stories not just mine...I tried to correct it by just pasting my original but I can\'t log in. Damn it all.
person raver
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very entertaining...this has to be one of my top 5 underage incest pieces! I certainly hope \'chappy\' 12 is one the way...it looks like their father is going to be back for more...
person Blonde King
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That father needs to be punished in a CRUEL way that blackmailing asshole!!

Brother and sister are fine to me, but father and dauther just can NOT BE THAT IS NOT RIGHT!!!!!

I hope you throw in a little plot to punish that bastard!

Other then that I did enjoy your fic.
person Kik Nikkin
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm....babies.....>.> Your story remains well-written, curse you.
person Bekll
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So vivid the scenes, and I like the fact that there is a plot. The thoughts g bac back from Ben to Janie was very clever. I loved it!
person Babboon
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, a great chapter (11). I do have a suggestion for the future, though. How about having their mom catch them and join in so that they don\'t have to be so secretive. Just a suggestion. Keep updating!
person me
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow I\'ve never read a better incest story. you turned me on too. damn you. you know you should have John and Ben indside Janie at the same time, it would be nice. even nicer would be if you did a scene where Ben and Janie were older and don\'t ever forget Duncan and his near gay experience with Ben and his lust for Janie. shit you could go so far with this. i\'m glad you brought the father into the mix. keep it up and i hope you add more soon
person swiss miss
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww! poor ben! and poor janie, too!
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. it is soo wrong and so dirty, and makes me soo fuckin horney. your writing is absolutley brilliant. keep it cumming! (pun very much intended)