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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You might want to do some reformatting with this. It's hard to read because it all blends together. You might want to skip a line between paragraphs.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really don't want to space it out. It's my style of writing. You'd be able to read it fine if you weren't jacking off hahaha! I might have another look at spacing when I add a new chappie. Thanks for all reviews/constructive criticism.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it\'s you. You left a review for me on Road to Yorkshire.. Wasn\'t able to respond with a thank you, so i decided to do the same for you. I like this story you wrote, but i was a bit nervous to write a review before. You put in a lot of detail to what the characters are feeling and after a while of reading the tension really does come alive.
-big kiss- Take care, keep up the good work, and don\'t blow up.
~L.o.T.
-big kiss- Take care, keep up the good work, and don\'t blow up.
~L.o.T.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey omg ur story is soo gud omg.. plz continue writing more chapters plz.. dis is by far my favourite story on aff..
i dont normally rite ne reviews on ne of da storiez buh since i tend to like ur story alot.. i thought dat i shudd give u sum encouragement.. well ne waiiz g2g bye
i dont normally rite ne reviews on ne of da storiez buh since i tend to like ur story alot.. i thought dat i shudd give u sum encouragement.. well ne waiiz g2g bye
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wrote an review earlier..and i juss wanted to say dat da email datz on da review isnt mine itz sum unknown person.. i wrote da wrong email by accident..
im soo sryy i put da wrong email in..sososo srry.omg if any one emailz dat email da person is gonna get into so much trouble
buh ne waiiz jus writing dis review to let u noe dat isn\'t ma email and dat ur stories r gudd
im soo sryy i put da wrong email in..sososo srry.omg if any one emailz dat email da person is gonna get into so much trouble
buh ne waiiz jus writing dis review to let u noe dat isn\'t ma email and dat ur stories r gudd
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha...I gotta read more hehehehe...*giggles* please update soon!!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome update
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS story is GREAT. U havent updated in a while. KEEP IT COMING. Another character would be nice, like a cousin or something. Not really feeling the whole, Ben + Father thing. Add the MOM. ONCE AGAIN, tHIS IS GREAT.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is an amazing story! Some of the best stuff I\'ve read! I\'m all wet jus thinking about it, plz update soon!