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excellent story, too bad mum hasn't joined yet

nice story. get the mom involved to complete it.

hi! i love this story and keep coming back to it. though i wish you could update it with the next chapter. i'm hungry to see what dad does with janie. does mom ever find out? lots and lots of questions ensue here.
:D

Normaly I am not into the whole incest thing in stories, but this is a really good book. I am hoping ben and his sister get to be together, I am not really liking the father to much. I think ben and his sister make a good couple.

YAY! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! another fabby fab chapter!

Glad to see the your updating again.
Good story, plots interesting
KEEP IT GREASY

Oh my! This is sick, but so damn good till chapter 8! Didn't like the involvement of John at all - not at that point anyways. But I know that is not upto me to decide - for one, it's a matter of taste and second, it isn't my story. What I would have loved more was to have the mom catch them first; get seduced by the couple; and then when she is in the game, she brings her husband in slowly. Now I hate the character of John :-( Hope it gets better in the coming chapters and you make us like John "the character" more :-) Over all, very well done *thumbs up*

This is a pretty good story. Im not into incest that much but this story was great two thubs up.

You know if it is inspired, you shouldn't write the exact same thing......stop ripping off stories.it's dumb and pointless....

All I can say in reply to that is HAVE YOU READ Animelover stuff and compared it to mine??? The only thing that's similar is the fact that there's incest and they're both well written. My writing has completely different perspectives, it's more of a storyline and I DO NOT rip off people's works. This was written in 2004....check to see....if this is similar to other stuff you've read they've probably ripped mine off. I've had lots of positive reviews and for them, I'm going to carry on this story.