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fucking hot dude! i would love to see some hardcore rape in this fic. too often its all fluff. little kids dont just give in to this shit. it would be great to have a chick make the little girl eat her out too while the guys jack off. have the girl cry a lot. maybe some good beastiallity too. nothing huge, maybe something like a hampster or a snake or something. just something weird. anyway, keep up the good work, it really made me wet!

Hey. About the rape scene it should be her father who rapes her and bondage would be nice. I hate most fics always have the person whos getting raped give in and thats not rape! Rape is were the person being pinned down does NOT give into sex! Keep her the age she is now when he rapes her don\'t make her any older than 5. Make it a long one to and have him slap her around, gag her, tie her arms to the bed posts. And to be different don\'t have him do anal on her yet because everyone now days in fanfic does like barely any pussy screwing. They go right to doing a ton of anal. Let him tie her up and rub her down freaking her out since shes so young. Then goes under her panties and fingers her before raping. Make it rough. Very rough and long. Oh yah and just a suggestion maybe have a woman or young girl rape her after her daddy later in the story with a strap-on and he just sits and watches the girl rape her while he masterbates and tapes it. Well for now thats all i have. Your the writer and these are just some thoughts i have. I hope you use some of them with your own so you can have a different scene. If you think they suck thats your choice your the nd tnd tnd the writer knows best^_^ I think that if you do this rape scene right you\'ll have a great childsex story. There\'s not many out there now. Thanx and good luck^_^

great story..I anyone tell you to make her older you should tell them to shut up. Because most little girl in fan fics are like 10 and older and they already know something about sex, but 5 is very inocent and makes it all the better. Can\'t wait the the rape scene you talked about..By the way i love incest and the younger the little girl the better when it\'s a fanfic of this nature. I\'m not saying i like just child sex fanfic but theres always the time and place for it^_^...keep writing.

I really like how you\'ve spaced it out - like the time frame and everything - keep the good work up!

Damnit!! Please! I beg!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

sounds good already - a few spelling errors nothing big though - maybe you should make the chapters a bit longer - keep it going though should be good!

THEY ARE VERY BAD BOYS!

Hi,

I love your story.
Please write a new chapter!

this is creepy...but I want to know more .... I will be cheking up on it

please have this girl age at least ten years before she is involved in anything sexual! i dont mind incest stories or sex with minors stories. but a five year old child in sexual situations is just sick!!!
this story has potential