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person the reveiwer

schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM

and the rest is.......????????

person Kaboom

schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Ummm great if you keep up with it...but right now not all that great. It seems like you have a good begining to a story plot just not a good set up for the begining.

person marie

schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM

This is really bad. Really really bad.

Please burn your keyboard and never write again...

I have no constructive criticism for this. No hope for this one. The least I can say is that you can at least spell correctly.

person Kate the Great

schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM

.....On the eve of Alyssa\'s fifteenth birthday on the 18th of December 1987.......
^ Day I was born. Sorry! Just had to say it.

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