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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No way. That's it?! That can't be the ending! The rest of the story was so good, I mean, how can it end that way?!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG if that is the end, I'm so going to flame this thing, and report abuse!! This story is so good and I'm angry now! Continue it! >_> I'm so mad...pleeeease continue!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t end it there! Please Please Please Post More! I\'m at the edge of my seat here!!!!!!
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I am wary of original fictions. They tend to suck more often than not, either by atrocious spellings or atrocious plot, or both. But this story hooked me right from the prologue. Good job! The story is very tragic. The only thing I\'m wodering about is the scene where Ithiel describes his eyes to Raquiel: if Raquiel is blind, how does he know that green is like the color of leaves? Was he born with good eyesight then went blind or was he born blind to begin with? In any case, keep up the good work. The cliffhanger was so, uhm, cliffhanger-y...update soon, I can\'t stand the wait ^_^
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It can\'t end like that? It\'s too sad to end that way. Please.......*sniffles*
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July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of things going for it. I read straight through..
the only thing that\'s nagging me is the rather visual-heavy descriptives. I would have liked to read more seduction/sex scene details from the blind POV (pun argh). Other than that though this is very enjoyable yaoi type stuff, 4 stars
the only thing that\'s nagging me is the rather visual-heavy descriptives. I would have liked to read more seduction/sex scene details from the blind POV (pun argh). Other than that though this is very enjoyable yaoi type stuff, 4 stars
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January 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
This is powerful.
i'm a yaoi fan and tend to be into bdsm... but this is deeper than a lot of what i see. the predjudice and the hate. this is very realistic and almost modern, cos i'm pretty sure there are *still* countries where atrocities like those described later on in the story still actually occur. it was really quite touching.
~ Edward ^-^
This is powerful.
i'm a yaoi fan and tend to be into bdsm... but this is deeper than a lot of what i see. the predjudice and the hate. this is very realistic and almost modern, cos i'm pretty sure there are *still* countries where atrocities like those described later on in the story still actually occur. it was really quite touching.
~ Edward ^-^