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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy linda y actualk historia, espero mas capitulos muy pronto, ana maria
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man this story keeps getting better and better i really cant wait for the next update im going to read over and over its awesomely good i know that aint a work but it is
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy your writing this story again. please i hope your taking your time and not going to rush them into sex. please please update!!!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you may want to check out Father Boticelli by TabooDesire. Your stories look very similar.
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TheNightButterfly - hey! lol glad u liked it. ive atually been busy and i think ill have the next chapterdy bdy by the end of the month. im not sure about that but ill try to finish the damn story lol cya
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dammit. i can\'t log in cos i seriously can\'t remember my password! lol
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has potential. I just love the whole forbidden fruit thing..teachers and priest\'s =D The only thing i really disliked was the confession in chapter one.e ofe of the things she said were so terrible and vulgar..it made me undercomfortable, and i almost didnt read the second chapter. I realize what you were going for..but it made me feel like it would make it impossible to make a romatic coupling on a base like that. Just beinnestnest. Anyway..please email me when you update.
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, i liked it!!! Thanks, that so sweet that you listened to me! A First! Didnt expect the incest part...not a fan of it, but i love that you slowed it down and are building a solid story. Keep it up, and i\'ll keep reading ^_^
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh...I try not to like this, but I do! This is twisted, yet a really hot and compelling story. Your new version of chapter 2 is even better than the first one. ^_^
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah I much prefer this chapter. You really capture their characters and I\'m ready for more sex now!! I can only imagine you really do have a brother because you know how annoying they can be!!