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Ha-ha, if only they all were. They're all just fantasies, ones that have been in my thoughts for a long time, and I just craft stories from them.

you wright so many good stories and they are sooo realistic are they really true?

One of my favorites. It took me awhile to find it again. Good job and very descriptive.

It\'s always a pleasure to have someone tell me that they liked my work. I really did try to flesh out this fantasy I had and if other people enjoy it too, more the better. I hope your boyfriend likes it ^-^. Oh and I have to thank you for leaving some of the most detailed feedback on my story.

--Arie

This is one of the hottest stories I\'ve read in a long time. I liked that the couple was married since there was spanking and he filmed her and everything. The titty-fucking scene was hot and I was glad you included it because a lot of authors don\'t. I also loved when she was in the tub and had the water running over her pussy. The only thing I might have done differently is made the husband tease her with the vibrator more. I really really liked this story and I think I\'m going to have to read it to my boyfriend =) sorry if that\'s TMI. Great job! -KB

I\'m sorry to say it looks like a technical problem ate my first chapter, I\'ll see what I can do about recovering it but I\'m not sure where to start ^^;

hey i want to read the first chapter! haha. whats wrong with it? loved the other 2 chapters tho. =)

Ah, very well done. I love how dominating the husband is without being nasty.

*emotions of jealousy seeping out of your computer moniter... right... now...* thats no fair. why doesn't my boyfriend do that for me? o yah cuz i gotta be MARRIED ahaha. [sarcasm]

Well, damn! I\'m highly impressed. An actual smutty story with a PLOT?! Unheard of here. Lol. Seriously, very nice writing and style to this story. Great job on it. Can\'t wait to read more.