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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! ur story made me so hot have u written any others. if not then please do.
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very compelling plot. And hot and sexy.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cruel ending but I like it:) Will you continue?
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow Fiona, this is a great story so far. I really like Gen and Emily together, but I like that you mix other stuff together like the torture scene with the DM. Maybe you couxplaxplain more his role and I\'m unsure of what he\'s really doing. The Queen c be be more present too. Overall, this is a great story and I hope to read more soon.