rate_review Reviews

No, it didn\'t suck, except for when it did :) Very nicely done, especially four our first time. Er... so to speak. Either you are a boy, or you have been with boys (or both) and I think this has helped you immensely.
(I hate those fics wherein the prostate is on the outside of the body therthere\'s no mention of internal cleanliness.) Kudos! And it was kinda nice. You know, even if Stephen isn\'t with his love, yet, or whatever. Still a
nscenscene, in my opinion. And your dialogue is awesome, also. It\'s like... how real people talk, and not how we like to think of real people talking. I apologise if I\'m overly-critiquing your style or method, but I do
believe that those are the most important facets in any writing; just as vital as plot, characters, and events. I most definitely look forward to the next installment.
Cheers, darkness, and many strange dreams,
azrael

Heh, that was some good smut there. Although I was a little tad dispointed that it wasn\'t with stepthen\'s best friend\'s father...

SUCK? Can you honestly tell me you thought even \'maybe\' it sucked? That was wonderful!!!!! Perfect amount of smut if I do say so myself! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep up the great work! I love this fic!

This is an amazing story. The sex scene was smut, I don\'t feel bad saying it because you admitted it, but it was tastefully done and maintained a flow in the story. Does Stephen lose points for screwing in front of the baby?

That was the most wonderful smutty little sex scene. Great job; writen like a true pro. ....Yet I feel almost....betrayed; naughty Stephen, shagging someone who is most certainly not Alec...

*Gets sun* un* We havin\' plot bunny tonight!

Cami the Homicidal Bunny

@_@
Hot damn.
Let\'s hear it for Luciell! That was AWESOME!!! Definitely not the 2 characters I was hoping for, but that would be a little too soon in the story I suppose. Still, I thouroughly approve. So is Stephen usually Seme or is he willing to be Uke for Alec?
Anyway, that was fantastic. I actually come on this site on a regular basis specifically to see if you\'ve updated and I\'m pretty damn happy right now. Thanks for posting!

Luv this chapter.....shoot this whole story. *bobs head rapidly* Checks sight everyday for updates. ^_^

This is a wonderful story and I\'m enjoying it very much. Please continue, I look forward to the next part and will keep checking back to see if it is.

Me like! Update soon pleases! I want to see
nakedness and lots of screwing!
And a happy ending!

I definitely liked this chapter... but I have to admit you had me worried there for a second when I read the author\'s note. As a general rule, I don\'t like non-con... but I was imagining something more along the lines of rape. Anyway, I liked the fact that Stephen\'s choir teacher is also lusting after him. What, is he like sex on legs or something? Another well written chapter, and quickly delivered too. Who could ask for anything more?