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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very nihapthapter. the part with the mother surpised meugh.ugh.
I wonder how she would react in the next chapter?
I wonder how she would react in the next chapter?
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hooray you updated! i cant wait to find out what is next. continue please!
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want another several chapters! ^_^ You\'re such a great writer, loving the story so far. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
btw, make sure you proof read your work. ^_^ There was one word that said \'rack\', and I think you meant the word \'track\'. ~.^
*dances around you*
btw, make sure you proof read your work. ^_^ There was one word that said \'rack\', and I think you meant the word \'track\'. ~.^
*dances around you*
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Funny. Leo is amusing... is he British? For some reason, I read it with a british accent...odd. I read everything with a british accent (specially so close to the Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban opening...I\'m a freak...). Anyway, it was good :) Besides the part where Alec said he wanted Stephen to have a guy who would leave him in a lurch... That was funny...
~PQ
~PQ
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I loved chapter 6. The humor is great, and the mild jealousy on both sides is very endearing. ^^
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@_@ i loved the sex scene *droooooooooool* please please please write more!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Nothing really happened in this chapter really and I still loved it! So the real man-whore is Stephen and not Alec. Hmmm... surprising (not really... he *is* a walking orgasim afterall) ^_- I can\'t wait for this party. And boths wes were jealous... how cute! Update soon! This is high quality work!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, I\'ve been following since the beginning, but I\'ve never had the time to review (I\'m always multi-tasking...reading five things at once, talking to three different people, you know...). But! I\'m bored out of my mind and procrastinating, so I figured I might as well drop a line. I love the story. it\'s witty, cute, and creative. I think you may have had some grammer/spelling errors, but I don\'t remember where, or when they were in the earlier chapters.
Great story, I look forward to more.
~Samma
Great story, I look forward to more.
~Samma
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and it\'s also greatly written. I can\'t wait to read more of it. Nice plot. This is a truly wonderful original fiction. I like it a lot, as you might have seen.
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I really like it a lot. I do hope you continue it soon. The plot is entrancing, the sex is hot, and the characters are interesting. Great job!