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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so far so good... but it feels like the switch from stephen\'s to alec\'s POV wasn\'t very smooth.
keep on writing!
keep on writing!
schedule
May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! I want it BAD! GIVE IT TO ME! Heh... sorry. I really like where this is going; you\'re handling it quite beautifully, darling. And, no, you didn\'t seem grouchy at all (to me at least). One cannot help if one\'s sick. Glad to hear you\'re feeling better (?). I eagerly await the next chapter!
-Cami the Homicidal Bunny
Oh! I also want one of those nifty chairs... ^^
-Cami the Homicidal Bunny
Oh! I also want one of those nifty chairs... ^^
schedule
May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*begs* Please, oh please don\'t stop *whimpers* I want more please now. *whimpers and begs* Pretty please with sugar and a cherry?
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wasn\'t saying you needed a beta, it\'s actually good just the way you have it. Better the most, actually.. Hell, it\'s probably even better then mine...my grammer and spelling sucks unless my word proc. program picks it up. Oh well.
Anyway, highly amusing chapter... Heh. Ink Ink I\'m a bit sadist... :shrug:: Lovely, can\'t wait for more.
~PQ
Anyway, highly amusing chapter... Heh. Ink Ink I\'m a bit sadist... :shrug:: Lovely, can\'t wait for more.
~PQ
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can only imagine how confused poor Alec must be feeling t not now... I\'m such an angst whore. And I, for one, haven\'t noticed anything distracting about your grammar. I guess some people are just anal about that stuff... ^^;
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It\'s addictive. I\'ve not going to say it\'s a literary master peice, but something about it makes me continue reading.
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^; Oh, wow. You poor, poor girl! Alec telling Stephen he wanted to be with him totally made my day (week? Sad, I know.)
It\'s neat how his Stephen\'s mother is so cool about his sexuality. It seems things might be starting to heat up...
Now, even with you spazing on \'drugs\' you are still one of my favourite Slash writers and, really, the grammer isn\'t all that bad.
I hope yoel bel better! ... And thanks for the pompom dance; it really motivated me to review. ^^
-Cami the Homicidal Bunny
It\'s neat how his Stephen\'s mother is so cool about his sexuality. It seems things might be starting to heat up...
Now, even with you spazing on \'drugs\' you are still one of my favourite Slash writers and, really, the grammer isn\'t all that bad.
I hope yoel bel better! ... And thanks for the pompom dance; it really motivated me to review. ^^
-Cami the Homicidal Bunny
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very suspenseful end. ^^ Nice chapter! I expected Leo to be a major dickhead, but I was pleasantly surprised that he turned out to be nice.
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! This rocks. I love the witty banter and how you played out the characters... if you dont keep on going I\'ll stop your cookie supply anything else that you crave ^_^
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If this is what you write when doped up, take drugs more often ! ;-)
I liked it, it\'s good, nice way to keep the story alive to put in an ex-boyfriend.
But you might want to spread it out over more text than this, cuz it seems like everything\'s happening very fast.
Other than that, I LOOOOVE IT ! I\'ve been sitting with a similar story in my head and
this one is better than anything I could\'ve imagined. Love your creativity and ideas!
later!
I liked it, it\'s good, nice way to keep the story alive to put in an ex-boyfriend.
But you might want to spread it out over more text than this, cuz it seems like everything\'s happening very fast.
Other than that, I LOOOOVE IT ! I\'ve been sitting with a similar story in my head and
this one is better than anything I could\'ve imagined. Love your creativity and ideas!
later!