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by gypsyqueen

person shadowcat
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like your story.....hope your adding more soon!!!
person Tatsuiechan
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic! Very easy to read, while offering great descriptions and...my god, the dialogue is outstanding. Very witty and wickedly funny, and I\'ve easily fallen in love with the characters you created. Great job, looking forward to much more!!
person D
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I wanna know what happened! Please continue, you can't just leave it there.
person E
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story and I´d love to see a different story with Leo in it, only I don´t want to hear about him going to south america(?) I´d like to hear more about him and Bradley. I think they´d make a good couple:) Anyway, like I said. Nice story, hope you finish it soon.
person Jem
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this! I tried to refrain myself from reading the whole thing in one sitting, but it was too good to pass up. Please, continue on with this. It's wonderful.
person MadameRuby
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.o Leo's in the hospital? BUT HE'S TOO SEXY TO DIE! Jeez, you better feed my review to that plot bunny right now so it can be happy, okay?
person Cami
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm, What happened? What's going on? I'm frightened that somebody got, uh, injured? Don't kill anybody! No angst! Please, let the last chapters be happy. I know what is haing ing to you. You're getting that "must-write-angst" plot-bunny we all get. Ignore it. Eat it. It's good. Like Cheetos.

... Hm, I never pictured Alec as a bottom

... I could just SEE that.

... In my head.

... Right now.

... Oh Lord, thank you. That is so super. :D

You have made me happy. So now, I'll say my favourite phrase(s) --- Ja, Prima! Nummer Eins! Super, Klasse! Superfantastich!

Why do you merit these scary praises? I think it's your style; Lord only knows how you write sex scenes so ... well. And it flows. I doesn't pain me with numerous grammer/spelling mistakes (your vocabulary is impressive, BTW) and the characters are just so realistic, you capture them well (but Alec is a bit scary when he's aroused). Now, it seems the plot has had a final (?) turn. Good show. I'll stop now. :D

- Cami the Homicidal (Happy...Horny? Horrible? Honduras?) Bunny

person jillij
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This damn thing better work! Anyhow, you better not kill Leo and you better explain what happened. And you better not make me cry! * glares * Can we kill the plot bunny and birth a PWP bunny? If the plot keeps on from here you're sure to make me cry. Curse you! ta
person Elli
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love It!!!! Please write some more, the story is great and so is the style of writing. Can't wait till the next chapter.
person ickly
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bring on the Leo-story!!!!!!!!! I can totally picture him doing all kinds of nasty things :-)