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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it--I think you\'re developing your characters very thoroughly and your writing and grammar are excellent. Keep going please!
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The school day was a little slow, I\'ll admit, but it wasn\'t painful and it really added to Stephen\'s character. Oh, and you completely made up for the \'uneventful\' school day with the scene at Andy\'s house, Alec was HOT as HELL! This is definitely one of my favorite stories on AFF and it\'s only the second chapter! Update soon, please!
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I adored both chapters! Please, write some more soon!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This isn\'t total crap! In fact, I\'d like to first compliment your use of the language, which is rare these days. Nice grammar, spelling, the technical parts. Nice. And as for your characters, they are actually
characters with reamensmensions. That\'s also rare, in my opinion. I\'d really love to flatter you more, but I\'m afraid I\'ll need to read more before I can ;) Sincerely lovely, and I do look forward to reading more.
Cheers, darkness, and odd dreams,
azrael
characters with reamensmensions. That\'s also rare, in my opinion. I\'d really love to flatter you more, but I\'m afraid I\'ll need to read more before I can ;) Sincerely lovely, and I do look forward to reading more.
Cheers, darkness, and odd dreams,
azrael
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the plot is very interesting. please write more and update soon!!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. luv characters. keep writing.^_^
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
Definitely continue! This is one of the few stories on AFF that actually seems to have a PLOT! I like PWP fics too (don\'t get me wrong) but it\'s just so much more enjoyable to read when the two characters are developed and you care about them. This was extremely well written and it seems well thought out. I especially like the bit about the name. Very interesting. Please CONTINUE!!! This was great!
Definitely continue! This is one of the few stories on AFF that actually seems to have a PLOT! I like PWP fics too (don\'t get me wrong) but it\'s just so much more enjoyable to read when the two characters are developed and you care about them. This was extremely well written and it seems well thought out. I especially like the bit about the name. Very interesting. Please CONTINUE!!! This was great!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I liked it a lot, and would love to see where it progresses from here. Please update quickly!
jessie
jessie
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like it i would LOVE to see what happens next plz update as soon as yan ^an ^-^
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It\'s good so far, very intriguing. It would be awesome if you kept writing on it. Really nice job!