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by Ariri

person dff
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job. keep it up. u rock my socks
person Angel
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, anticipation is a good thing... well only to a point. As a young writer it was very good. Keep it up! And I will be checking back to see if you wrote any more.
person Gothic kittie from hell
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome........
person drake220
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked it a lot! continue please!
person Arie
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well it was never really my intention to continue this as I prefer, well not stand alone stories, but stories that are interconnected through the characters. All of my original fiction involves one or both of these characters so you can always read those for more of them--I just published a new one \"mouthful\" yesterday. If I do however decide to continue this particular story, it would have to deal with role reversal.
person xe0x_des0s
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's good. I usually read slave fics that are more rough, but I guess a bit of fluff wouldn't hurt a guy like me. LOL. I'm more into the violent sex deal. But yeah.. cool.
person Ariri
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I suppose the sequel could be considered \"Simple Pleasures\" I just posted it today.
person anon
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic...hurry and write more