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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you have so far with the story. It's a good concept, and I hope to see more.
I Suppose my only problem is the sever spelling errors all the way through. I'd get caught up in the story, and then I'd have to try and piece together what it was that you were trying to say...
I Suppose my only problem is the sever spelling errors all the way through. I'd get caught up in the story, and then I'd have to try and piece together what it was that you were trying to say...
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o_o