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for The Forgotten Gods

by dmetria

person Neji-chan
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. very interesting characters. especially Lothus. i wonder who his father was?
A liitle bit difficult to read. not enough paragraphs for me but maybe thats only my opinion.
Anyways hope you write more soon.
person CrimsonCherry
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start.Beautiful description, and vivid characters. I cannot wait for more. so please hurry up post some .