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Waaaa! So cute! I really enjoyed reading this (...stayed up three hours later than I normally do just to finish it) Sounds like your RPs are very intense and the characters believable. Great work!

*falls over asleep*

Honestly, I think you (yous) as) are wonderful writers. I really like how you've managed to get into the mind frame of males who are realizing that homosexuality isn't absolutely unacceptable or despicable. There aren't many fics out there that work with that. Usually, the characters are already settled with the idea that they're homosexual. I also really enjoyed reading the internal comments that make your characters that much more human and easier to identify with. Truly, you guys are commendable.

BTW--Please do consider a sequel. I'd like to see Nathanial and Sebastian develop their relationship now that Nate has decided to not back out. Plus, maybe seeing Sebastian give himself a chance at happiness on a different level would definitely give me a thrill.

so far, so good! Keep it up! :)

I will just say that I have NEVER read an original fic before (I haven\'t ever wanted to) and only did because it was YOU that wrote it. I am completely smitten with your writting. I wish you\'d hurry up and get to the lemon though! This story is very good, you always flesh out your characters very well, and the story ideas are very vell thought out before penned (or typed as the case may be.) Please update all you storys soon!

;.; They finally get so close...and I have to go out of town... Gaa!!! I shall have catching up to do when I return home. lol

^.^ This is so cool. lol

I don\'t ever read original stories online - just fanfics. So this is my first. But it\'s so nifty. I\'m still trying to figure out Sebas, an, and there\'s this little niggling of curiousuty of Nate\'s background too. It\' really great to not know the characters for once. ^.^

Oh I read that manga, it was really good! In a weird, slightly disturbing way... I can definitely see the similarities between the 2 stories. This is great, please update soon!

;.; If you don\'t finish this...I will hunt you...

lol Seriously, it\'s great! And with fanfics I can always dream up an ending on my own anyway. But these chars are original, so you have to play them out to the end, k? ^.^ I wanna see Nate get laid XD

Ye~! Chp. 2!

^_^ I love the \"types\". I wanted that explained so badly. lol

Also... I like the fruit... ^.^() Not that you even noticed or did it on purpose, but in the first Sebastian ate an orange and now he\'s eating a pear. lol It\'s like...his mouth always has to be *doing* something. Smirking, teasing, eating...

Anywho, can\'t wait to read more. ^.^