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for Brotherly Love

by PervertedThoughts

person happy girl
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u better not stop there! im waiting for the next chapter!!!
person dragonflyelj
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
naughty naughty author!!! lmao. well, that was... HOT. Although the thought of them being actual siblings does somewhat bother me, but if I picture them as step siblings, it is all good. hehe. I will be watching for the next chapter!
person Strike
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is well writeen. I am interested in seeing where you go with it. Please write more soon.
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PERVERTED? WHAT ARE YOU, NUTS!? I THINK IT\'S AMAZING! I LOVE BROTHER AND SISTER INCEST! IT\'S THE BEST! AND YOU\'RE THE BEST! WRITE MORE, SOON!
person MOFAF
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm...so they both like what they see...and want to get a little closer???

sounds like a nice visit home for those two...maybe they each have friends that will join theer ter the summer?
person daylight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM


I think Nicky needs to go to a club, find a girl and fuck her instead of his sister!! I will say: this you are a good writer. And no this is not a flame.
person happy girl
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was really well written. perfect detail and description. keep this story going. update again soon!
person anon
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hurry with more please
person Have to know!
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is it really wrong to have crush on your sibbling or just wrong to act on it. although i must say that had my brother been that fine we have been lovers too. after all he was my best friend for yrs and still is to this day. and I have always heard that your best friend is the best lover you will ever have. I like this story and am turned on by it Greatly so pervert you are not alone in your naughty thoughts. Please do update soon.
person Sexy Sisster
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH!!!! I like very much and very nicly written. I can\'t wait for more. Nothing like a hot summer for some sweaty steamy incest. Gots to love all the perverts out there or I would have no entertanment!!!! Thanks so much for sharing your Nicky with the rest of us. I sure am enjoying him thus far.

Sexy Sisster Sammie